My fans tell me that I write good tension. I need to improve on that. I am getting and am learning from my reviews. I write a little better. I have improved much. I will practice writing more. I feel the fun and passion of it. I am getting on the right track. Keep writing!

A detective resolves a crime scene.

Source: Mullen The Serial Killer by Raul1

Tim flies around Earth.

Source: Flying Boy by Raul1

In time my writing will improve by practicing every day, patience, with perseverance, and determination. I will get better and it will show. I keep writing.

Horror villains lose at the end.

Slime wins over it all.

Source: Gooeey Slimmie by Raul1

Dent tajes a chance at life.

Source: Given A Chance by Raul1

Sara has a favorite friend.

Source: My Favorite Friend by Raul1

Each coming day gets ugly.

Source: Murders of May by Raul1

My writing can be read by readers, and it makes sense to them. I will proofread, self-edit, and reread my works.